Hi, My name is Cristobal Carvajal, i'm the first born son of my parents. I'm a student of Pharmacy in the Universidad de Chile and this is my first year at the Fac. of Chemistry and Pharmaceutical Sciences.
I'm 18 years old, i born in Santiago de Chile in Independencia, my parents are from diferents places of Chile, my mother Elsa is from San antonio (a little town close to the ocean in the middle of the country) and my father is from El Valle del Elqui wich is in the north of Chile and close to the mountains, some people call it the place of the eternal sun because the sun shines all the year,even is very weird if it rains or snow, how ever when this happen it becomes a very beautiful place.
A few moths ago i become a High level sportist in swimming and take it with the studies it's really difficult, always with my family and friend giving me the strenght to keep trying and never give up, what i always say is "Easy or hard,life is boring without challenges".
It's really boring to be the only son by 18 years, the most of the brother can grow together and share experiences having a good time, since i become a big brother i feel the responsability of take cake of my little sister (as any brother has to) and help her with any problem that she could have, grow alone was not good but be the gide and as a hero to my sister is even better.
Hi Cristóbal,
ReplyDeleteA beautiful blog showing warmth and family attachment. Your description of Valle del Elqui tells me that you love nature. I think I will continue to enjoy your descriptive language. Congratulations..!!
A comment on language: a) Always write "I" with capital letter when you refer to yourself (I'm Cristóbal) b)You should say "I was born" instead of "I born" and "I became" instead of "I become". Lastly, I think you should try short and simple sentences instead of long sentences. Long sentences usually lead to mistakes.
Regards,